This comic series focus FMG sequences, so, the plot is kinda in fifth plan. The comic may be short but LuigisJuy did a great job in there. As I said on earlier posts, this particular story can be improved in several ways with more detailed scenes, fight sequences, I would love to make the Princess to rip those Chain Chomp apart or use them like weapons. And others things too.
First let's see if you guys likes the story after all. Soon I gonna post a poll to choose the next queen.